Designing Single Cover

Here is the single cover of the song I am using in my music video.
Below are all the stages:

Here is stage 1 where Krysia Knox (model) is sat at a dressing table with the song title written on the mirror with lipstick:

 Stage 2 has been embossed around the edge of the image, I used this effect as an experiment to see whether it makes the image more attractive and effective:

 Stage 3 I decided not to use the embossing frame so instead I brightened the colour of the lipstick written on the mirror to ensure it was clear to read for the target audience:

 Here is my 4th and final stage where I darkened the image and used contrasting effects to make the image look more appealing and attractive: