Commentary of Music Video

Feedback

Feedback

I have recieved feedback from members of the target audience, I am planning on uploading all the feedback onto my blog as a video. Yesterday I had filmed the feedback off my camera and then saved the video onto my memory stick. I have tried to edit/cut the parts where there is hestitation, unfortunatley when playing the footage before editing, the whole footage continuously jumped and didn't play correctly, which means I will now have to use Pinnacle Studios (which is the software I used to import the footage off the camera onto the computer) instead of Windows Movie Maker (which is a software I was hoping to use).

Evaluation

Final Music Video

Music Video Full Length Draft

I video I have changed the begining of the video, I did this because in my first draft the begining section was filmed on my mobile phone and was very unsteady. So in this video I have changed the location of the begining section to indoors rather than what I originally planned would be outside. Other sections I had changed from the first upload is the extreme close-up on the lips, I have used this new footage because the artist is wearing bright pink lipstick, which makes the video more attractive, feminine and effective compared to the first draft where the artist didn't wear lipstick at all. I hope this music video meets all the common conventional features aswell as a few unconventional features which I believe is where the camera is "handheld" close on the artist face when she is on the floor.

Andrew Goodwins Theory